Classmate Interview

In my first news article, I made some minor mistakes in my final draft. In my opinion, the worst mistake I made was using the dictionary to define "occupation." It does show that I am not a professional writer. The next big mistake I made was being too wordy in some parts of my story. I should've caught these errors. Another mistake I made was I did not wrap up the ending of my story. I ended my story with what Katie's favorite occupation was. I should have further explained why I thought her answer was so interesting.